What is one healthy habit you want to start, and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to start a running someday.
It is aerobic exercise, so it help lose weight.
Running is hot trend recently in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I want to start a running someday.
>> I want to start running someday.
It is aerobic exercise, so it help lose weight.
>> It is an aerobic exercise, so it helps with weight loss.
Running is hot trend recently in Korea.
>> Running has become a popular trend in Korea recently.
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