What is one hobby you’ve always wanted to try but haven’t yet?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to try swimming. A few years ago I had a trip in Singapore, I stayed at the hotel
there was swimming pool on the top foor .I saw a foreign granmather ,she was good at swimming
At that time I decided to learn swimming.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! It’s never too late to try out new things! I hope you can learn swimming. ^^ Thank you and enjoy your Wednesday!
~T. Jewel
I want to try swimming.
>>CORRECT
A few years ago I had a trip in Singapore,
>>A few years ago, I took a trip to Singapore.
I stayed at the hotel.
>>CORRECT
there was swimming pool on the top foor .
there was swimming pool on the top foor .
>>There was a swimming pool on the top floor.
I saw a foreign granmather ,she was good at swimming
>>I saw a foreign grandmother who was good at swimming.
At that time I decided to learn swimming.
At that time I decided to learn swimming.
>>At that time, I decided to learn swimming.
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