What is one luxury item you really want to have?

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 I was a Samsung mobile phone user and I have been using iPhone for 3 years.

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Apple released 2018 models last year with really high prices, so people hesitated to purchase iPhone because of the prices. 

>>> Apple released 2018 models last year which are very expensive, so people hesitated to purchase iPhone because of the prices. 

 I considered to change my smart phone when Apple issued the new models, but I was not able to buy it.

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 I thought it is ridiculous price and I realized that people should not pay much money to purchase mobile phone every year or every two years.

>>>  I thought it is a ridiculous price and I realized that people should not pay much money to purchase mobile phones every year or every two years.

I have seen news about the tricks of mobile phone company.

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That is company produce phones can use only 2 years in order to users to change their phones frequently.

>>> That is, companies produce phones which can only be used for 2 years in order for the users to change their phones frequently.

 Nevertheless , I am eager to have iPhone XS, if I am afford to buy it.

>>> Nevertheless , I am eager to have iPhone XS, if I can afford to buy it.

My friend who already changed his phone told me that the photo which was taken by new iPhone is more real, clear and more beautiful.

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I would like to have a next model of iPhone.

>>> I would like to have the next model of iPhone.