What is one luxury item you really want to have? Why?

Hi Sir [이름]!

Thanks for your composition. ^^

I am so happy that I received one from you.

All of the things that you mentioned below are definitely true.
We all are obsessed with materialism to some extent.

We should try not to depend on materials things.
Have a great week ahead of.

Teacher Nina

Actually, I’m not into luxury items.

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Although I do agree that how to dress and what to wear are very important in our social lives and people could be judged by them, wearing or possessing luxury items are not the only solution to look good or to have self-esteem.

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>> OR: Although, I do agree that how to dress and what to wear are very important in our social lives and people could be judged by them, wearing or possessing luxury items are not the only solution to look good or to have a good self-esteem.

There are many ways that we can build self-esteem and look professional to others even without wearing or owning luxury items.

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We live in the society in which materialism is prevalent.

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The media also greatly helps materialism grow and govern the society and people’s perception.

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TV programs, the internet, and social networking sites are spending too much time and focusing on celebrities wearing luxury goods such as cloths, watches, bags, etc.

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Even when celebrities depart or arrive at the airport, TV reporters make a fuss to air what they wear and how they dress.

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We all are obsessed with materialism to some extent.

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Many people are critical about indulging in luxury goods, but we ourselves are also somewhat no exceptions.

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