What is one mistake you\'ve done that you don\'t want to happen anymore?
학생이 쓴 원문
I used to take good care of others like giving side dishes, gift, anniversary and birthday. But I can say this is on my mistake. Also, I won\'t do that anymore. It\'s because whether to do it or not, the one who leaves will leave. So I will take care of the ones who keep staying around me. I\'ve been living feeling, Don\'t strive to be a good person to the other people. Just I will do whatever I want without worrying about the people around me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
Yes, self-love must come first. You have to know how to love yourself first before loving other people. :)
I used to take good care of others like giving side dishes, gift, anniversary and birthday.
>> I used to take good care of others like giving side dishes and gift on special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries.
But I can say this is on my mistake.
>> But I can say that this is a mistake.
Also, I won\'t do that anymore.
>> CORRECT
It\'s because whether to do it or not, the one who leaves will leave.
>> It\'s because whether I do it or not, people still leave me.
So I will take care of the ones who keep staying around me.
>> So I will take care of the ones who keep stays around me.
I\'ve been living feeling, Don\'t strive to be a good person to the other people.
>> I\'ve been thinking that I shouldn\'t strive to be a good person for other people.
Just I will do whatever I want without worrying about the people around me.
>> I will just do whatever I want to without worrying about the people around me.
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