What is one mistake you\'ve done that you don\'t want to happen anymore? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I didn\'t do any big mistakes.
Of course I did several small mistakes, but not big mistakes.
I\'ve fought with my friends, I\'ve lied to my parents, and I did a lot of mistakes, but those are all small mistakes.
Because of this reason, I have no mistakes that I want to change or don\'t want to happen annymore.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Actually, I didn\'t do any big mistakes.
>> Actually, I haven\'t done any big mistakes.
Of course I did several small mistakes, but not big mistakes.
>> Of course, I have done several mistakes but not big ones.
I\'ve fought with my friends, I\'ve lied to my parents, and I did a lot of mistakes, but those are all small mistakes.
>> I\'ve fought with my friends, lied to my parents, and a lot more but they are just small mistakes.
Because of this reason, I have no mistakes that I want to change or don\'t want to happen annymore.
>> Because of these reason, I don\'t have any mistakes that I don\'t want to happen anymore.
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