What is one of your favorite TV shows? Explain 5-6 sentences.
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>>> T. James
My favorite TV show is \" I live alone\".
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The show is that many entertainers or celerbrity are shown their personal ilfe.
>>> The show is that many entertainers or celebrities are shown their personal life.
The reason why i like this TV show is that audience can know entertainer\'s other side humanlity.
>>> The reason why I like this TV show is that audience can know entertainer\'s other side of their life.
From time to time, people think that celerbrity always lives glamorous life.
>>> From time to time, people think that celebrities always live the glamorous life.
However, celerbrity is also a person like me.
>>>However, celebrity is also a person like me.
So i feel that the show is more attractive for me.
>>> So, I feel that the show is more attractive for me.
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