What is one place in your city that holds special memories for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a old stadium in my city.
The football team for my city plays a game in this stadium almost every week.
Last year, although second division, they won the league and they got a champion.
So, the stadium hold many memories.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
There is a old stadium in my city.
>> There is an old stadium in my city.
The football team for my city plays a game in this stadium almost every week.
>> The football team from my city plays games in this stadium almost every week.
Last year, although second division, they won the league and they got a champion.
>> Last year, even though they were in the second division, they won the league and became champions.
So, the stadium hold many memories.
>> So, the stadium holds many memories.
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