What is one thing in your routine that you always do?

2026-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

학생이 쓴 원문

I always study Chinese at least 10 minutes every day night. On 1st January, I resolve to learn other languages for being a flight attendant. So, I paid about 200,000 won (8,000 PHP) and started to study Chinese. When I was 4th grades, the last semester of college, I had learned Chinese focusing on writing in liberal arts for 3months. Before that, I thought Chinese is a language that has a very high barrier to entry. But, when I tried it, it wasn\'t like that! So I felt an interest and decided to keep learning Chinese! Nowadays, I\'m busy with preparing interview so I couldn\'t invest enough time and remember what I learned... I have to study for my money\'s worth. I\'m going to try to study harder from today! I swear.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Sunny!
Thank you for doing your homework. It’s my first time knowing that, aside from English, you are also studying Chinese. It is indeed an advantage to be multilingual if you want to become a flight attendant. I hope you have more time to study different languages, and it’s really nice to see that you are so dedicated to pursuing your dreams!
- T. Caitlyn 
I always study Chinese at least 10 minutes every day night. 
>> I always study Chinese for at least 10 minutes every night.
On 1st January, I resolve to learn other languages for being a flight attendant. 
>> On 1st January, my New Year’s resolution was to learn other languages to become a flight attendant.
So, I paid about 200,000 won (8,000 PHP) and started to study Chinese. 
>> CORRECT
When I was 4th grades, the last semester of college, I had learned Chinese focusing on writing in liberal arts for 3months. 
>> When I was in 4th grade, the last semester of college, I had studied Chinese for three months, focusing on writing in liberal arts.
Before that, I thought Chinese is a language that has a very high barrier to entry. 
>> Before that, I thought Chinese was a language with a very high barrier to entry.
But, when I tried it, it wasn\'t like that! 
>> CORRECT
So I felt an interest and decided to keep learning Chinese! 
>> So I became interested and decided to continue learning Chinese!
Nowadays, I\'m busy with preparing interview so I couldn\'t invest enough time and remember what I learned... 
>> Nowadays, I’m busy preparing for interviews, so I haven’t been able to invest enough time or remember what I learned.
I have to study for my money\'s worth. 
>> CORRECT
I\'m going to try to study harder from today!
>> CORRECT
I swear.
>> CORRECT

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