What is one thing that many people don't know about you?

2014-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I try to hide the devil that exists inside me, but many people probably know it and can see it from me regardless of how hard I’m trying not to disclose it. I look a pretty nice guy to my colleagues, friends, and my family. I am cool, intelligent, fair, rational, and care for others. I pursue and support freedom of the press, equal opportunity, enhancing social safety net, and improving public welfare. However, contrary to my rational thought, my heart acts differently. When my personal space is invaded or my rights and interests are infringed, I easily get upset and blame others. I am sensitive to my emotions, while I less care about others’ feelings. I’m a bit selfish. People usually try to be a good person to others or at least behave as such, however, everybody has another aspects of him/hers. I believe all the people have something that he/she likes to hide from others. But let’s keep our faith strong in ourselves and appreciate who I am.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]! Thank you for letting me know you better. You are really cool because you are really open to talk about any topic. I am so happy to see your improvements in writing. Keep it up! You are making long and meaningful essays. I love reading your compositions.Talk to you in class. have a great night. Teacher Nina   I try to hide the devil that exists inside me, but many people probably know it and can see it from me regardless of how hard I’m trying not to disclose it. >> Correct! >> OR: I try to hide the devil that exists inside me, but many people probably know it and can see it from me, regardless of how hard I\'m trying not to disclose it. I look a pretty nice guy to my colleagues, friends, and my family. >> Correct! >> OR: I am a pretty nice guy to my colleagues, friends and family. I am cool, intelligent, fair, rational, and care for others. >> I am cool, intelligent, fair, rational and caring to others. I pursue and support freedom of the press, equal opportunity, enhancing social safety net, and improving public welfare. >> Correct! However, contrary to my rational thought, my heart acts differently. >> Correct! When my personal space is invaded or my rights and interests are infringed, I easily get upset and blame others. >> Correct! I am sensitive to my emotions, while I less care about others’ feelings. I’m a bit selfish. >> I am sensitive with my emotions, while I care less about other\'s feelings and I\'m a bit selfish. People usually try to be a good person to others or at least behave as such, however, everybody has another aspects of him/hers. >> Correct! I believe all the people have something that he/she likes to hide from others. >> Correct! But let’s keep our faith strong in ourselves and appreciate who I am. >> Correct! >> OR: But let\'s keep our faith strong in ourselves and appreciate who we are.

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