What is one thing that you can not live without?
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What is one thing that you can not live without?
I cannot live without music. It is one of the most effective way of relieving my stress.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework!
I also agree with you. Music is definitely a great way to relieve stress. ^^
See you in class!
I cannot live without music.
>>CORRECT
OR >> Music is needed in my daily life.
It is one of the most effective way of relieving my stress.
>>It is one of the most effective ways of relieving my stress.
OR >> It is an effective way to relieve my stress.
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