What is one thing that you think you will never change about yourself? Why?

2020-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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A phobia of insects is one thing that I think I will never change about myself. It\'s because I\'ve been afraid of even small insects since I was a kid. Even now, I still can\'t catch a single insect. I am likely to be afraid of them all my life.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Good evening!
Thank you for submitting your homework. ^^
It\'s really hard to face our fears but I hope that you\'ll be able to overcome it even little by little.

Anyway, always take care and have a good night! 

~Teacher Gina


A phobia of insects is one thing that I think I will never change about myself.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I think I will never get rid of my fear towards insects.
It\'s because I\'ve been afraid of even small insects since I was a kid.
>> CORRECT.
Even now, I still can\'t catch a single insect.
>> CORRECT.
I am likely to be afraid of them all my life.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I\'m likely to keep my phobia all my life.

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