What is one thing you have learned from your past? What would you do differently if you could? Remem

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I`vs been recoginized I can accomplish something that with positive manner. 

>>I recognized that I can accomplish something with positive manner. 
 Forexample, When i received university tuition notice I decided to be a scholar.

>>For example, when I received a university tuition notice to be a scholar.

because at that time by the expensive tution fee, Most of students protest to the goverment and excutives.

>>Because of the expensive tuition fee at that time, most students protest to the goverment and executives.

 but I has different thoughts. rather than attending the protest or complaining the policies, I endeavor to obtaing great grades for all subjects.

>>But I had a different prospective rather than attending the protest or complaining  to the policies, I endeavor to obtain great grades for all of my subjects.

Thus I consecutively achieve my aim during the 3years. 

>>Thus, I consecutively achieve my aim for 3 years. 
Second, doctor urge me to manage my health condition.

>>On the other hand, a doctor urge me to manage my health condition.

 doctor said if you maintain your condition, you will obtain some of deaseas.

>>The doctor said, that if you will maintain your condition, you will not obtain any disease.

as soon as listen to his advice, i registered for the gym.

>>As soon as I heard his advice, I registered at the gym.

I`ve been make my body healthier than past after 6month. 

>>I\'ve been making my body healthier for the past after 6month. 
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>>By these reasons, it is important to have a positive [이름]d.