What is one thing you have never done but would like to do?
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If I have a Recreational vehicle, I would go to camping everywhere for one month. After parking a car beside of beach, I am going to make some food for drinking alcohols. And then, I will be drinking alcohols, while watching sunset. I won\'t drink alcohols much, It\'s because I will wake up early for watching sunrise.
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If I have a Recreational vehicle, I would go to camping everywhere for one month.
>> If I have a recreational vehicle, I would go camping everywhere for one month.
After parking a car beside of beach, I am going to make some food for drinking alcohols.
>> After parking a car beside the beach, I am going to make some food for drinking alcohols.
And then, I will be drinking alcohols, while watching sunset.
>> CORRECT!I won\'t drink alcohols much, It\'s because I will wake up early for watching sunrise.
>> I won\'t drink alcohols much, it\'s because I will wake up early to watch the sunrise.
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