What is one thing you like and one thing you don\'t like about your cafeteria?
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One thing I like about our cafeteria is that special food is served on special days.
For example, on a hot summer day, cool food is served as a special dish, or chicken dishes are served on a day when people eat chichken called Boknal.
But one thing I don\'t like about the cafeteria is that fish food comes out too often.
Actually, I don\'t really like fish food.
It\'s because fish that I\'ve eaten a lot, such as mackerel and hairtail, are fine, but I don\'t eat other fish very well.
However, maybe it\'s because of nutrition, but fish dishes are served at least once a week in our cafeteria, and I think that\'s a complaint because I don\'t like fish food.
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Thank you, [이름], for submitting your essay to me. I appreciate the answer you gave, as it has your experience too. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
One thing I like about our cafeteria is that special food is served on special days.
>> CORRECT.
Thank you, [이름], for submitting your essay to me. I appreciate the answer you gave, as it has your experience too. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
One thing I like about our cafeteria is that special food is served on special days.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I like that our cafeteria offers special dishes on special occasions.
For example, on a hot summer day, cool food is served as a special dish, or chicken dishes are served on a day when people eat chichken called Boknal.
>> For example, on hot summer days, they serve cool dishes, and on Boknal, they serve chicken dishes.
But one thing I don\'t like about the cafeteria is that fish food comes out too often.
>> But one thing I don’t like about the cafeteria is that fish dishes are served too often.
>> Or: One thing I don’t like is that they serve fish too often.
>> Or: One thing I don’t like is that they serve fish too often.
Actually, I don\'t really like fish food.
>> Actually, I don’t really like fish.
>> Or: I’m not a fan of fish dishes.
>> Or: I’m not a fan of fish dishes.
It\'s because fish that I\'ve eaten a lot, such as mackerel and hairtail, are fine, but I don\'t eat other fish very well.
>> It’s because I’m okay with fish I’m used to, like mackerel and hairtail, but I don’t really eat other types of fish.
However, maybe it\'s because of nutrition, but fish dishes are served at least once a week in our cafeteria, and I think that\'s a complaint because I don\'t like fish food.
>> However, maybe for nutritional reasons, the cafeteria serves fish dishes at least once a week, and I don’t like that because I don’t enjoy fish.
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