What is one thing you’ve never done but would like to do

2021-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elsa

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I have never gone surfing, but I really would like to do. One of my friend told me that it is the most fantastic experience what people can do. If I have a chance to do it, I want to surf by the Hawaii Waikiki.

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Sue,
That\'s a great activity! I think, I have to learn how to swim first. 
Thanks for this.
~ T. Elsa ^^
I have never gone surfing, but I really would like to do.
>> CORRECT.
OR >> 
I have never gone surfing, but I really would like to.
One of my friend told me that it is the most fantastic experience what people can do.
>> 
One of my friends told me that it is the most fantastic experience one person can do.
 If I have a chance to do it, I want to surf by the Hawaii Waikiki.
>> 
If I have a chance to do it, I want to surf at the Hawaii Waikiki.

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