What is one thing you would change about your past if you could?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always satisfied my life and past choices. But if i have to change one choice in my past, i want to change my wife more young girl. My wife is younger one age than me, and sometimes, i envy my friends who married with very young girl. Is this too honest?
강사 첨삭
Hi Jack,
It’s really nice to see your answer today! I always appreciate how honest and straightforward you are, it makes your writing enjoyable to read. You expressed your thoughts clearly, and I can see you’re becoming more confident with English. Great job!
Your answer was also a little funny in a playful way, and I understand the humor behind it. Many people sometimes think about “what if” moments in life, but what really matters is that you are satisfied with your life now and the choices you made. That shows wisdom and maturity. Advance Happy birthday to your wife. ^^
I always satisfied my life and past choices.
I have always been satisfied with my life and my past choices.
OR>> I’m generally happy with my life and the decisions I made.
But if i have to change one choice in my past, i want to change my wife more young girl.
>>But if I had to change one thing in my past, I might choose to marry someone younger.
My wife is younger one age than me, and sometimes, i envy my friends who married with very young girl.
>>My wife is one year younger than me, and sometimes I envy my friends who married much younger women.
Is this too honest?
>>CORRECT
OR>>Maybe I’m being too honest.
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