What is one tradition that you want to change in Korea? Why? Make a short essay about this.
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a custom of visiting parent’s house on lunar holiday in Korea. When Married person visits their parent’s house in lunar holiday, they visit to husband’s parents at first before visiting wife’s parents. I want to change this Because it’s unfair.
강사 첨삭
Hello Su A! Great job in your homework today!
Until the next one!
See you in class on Monday!
~Teacher Sheila
>>There is a custom of visiting parents\' houses on the lunar holiday in Korea.
When Married person visits their parent’s house in lunar holiday, they visit to husband’s parents at first before visiting wife’s parents.
>>For married couple, they visit the husband\'s parents first before visiting the wife\'s parents.
I want to change this Because it’s unfair.
>>I want to change this because it\'s unfair.
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