What is one unique way we can show our love to other people?

2022-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t think about unique way. It\'s okay as long as we express it well. You like it when it\'s good and you\'re happy when it\'s happy. But the best present is money. hahaha

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic:)

Hahahaha! That\'s true. Money is the best gift of all.

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I don\'t think about unique way.

>> I can\'t about a unique way.

It\'s okay as long as we express it well.

>> CORRECT

You like it when it\'s good and you\'re happy when it\'s happy.

>> You like it when it\'s good and when it makes you happy.

But the best present is money. hahaha

>> But the best present for me is money. Hahaha!

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