What is personal hygiene? How important is personal hygiene to you?
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Personal hygiene is to keep our body clean against with viruses.
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We are already doing it.
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For example, there are many ways like washing hair regularly, taking shower daily, and brushing teeth after eating.
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Especially it is very important to wash hands regularly because we touch many things with our hands so, hands contact many viruses easily.
>>Especially, it is very important to wash hands regularly because we touch many things with our hands so, hands contact result to viruses easily.
We should always take care of personal hygiene.
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Because it is the first step and best method to prevent invasion of viruses.
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That is not to make environment which viruses can live.
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Diseases can’t be occurred at first.
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Also, it is very easy and the cheapest way.
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Why do we avoid the most effective way to live healthy life?
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Thus, personal hygiene is very important for everyone.
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