What is poverty?
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Hi Su ^^
Poverty is a kind of financial stages.
>>> Poverty is a kind of financial stage.
It means that someone or some country has not enough money or possessions to sustain their life.
>>> It means that someone or some country did not have enough money or possessions to sustain their life.
In this situation, people usually suffer hunger, water shortage, homeless and unsanitary living conditions.
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Consequently, the people is put under a lot of stress.
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Poverty is normally caused by incompetent government and natural disaster.
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The tragic living condition is harsher to face for the senior, children, women, handicapped people and sufferer.
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It is very harsh to get out of this situation, because it is more easy to earn money if someone is rich.
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It can pass to another generation as well.
>>> It can be pass to the next generation as well.
To improve this situation, consciousness of a lot of people and another countries is needed.
>>> To improve this situation, consciousness of a lot of people and other countries are needed.
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