What is poverty? Answer in 3 to 5 sentences:

2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

학생이 쓴 원문

Normally, poverty means scarcity of money or property. But in my view, there is a different kind of poverty. Even if a person is rich, he doesn\'t have proper morality. I think lack of thoughtfulness is also a kind of poverty, and perhaps it\'s a more severe matter.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Thank you for your efforts :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><



Normally, poverty means scarcity of money or property.

>>> correct


 But in my view, there is a different kind of poverty.

>>> correct

>>> OR: But in my own opinion, there is a different kind of poverty.


 Even if a person is rich, he doesn\'t have proper morality.

>>> correct


 I think lack of thoughtfulness is also a kind of poverty, and perhaps it\'s a more severe matter.

>>> correct



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