what is significance of having friends?
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The significance of having friends is you will not be lonely.And the other reason is you will have fun playing with your friends.you will also enjoy talking with them.And if you don`t have any friends,then you WILL be lonely and have nobody to play with.So I think it`s good to have a friend.^-^-^-^-^
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The significance of having friends is you will not be lonely.
>>CORRECT
And the other reason is you will have fun playing with your friends.
>> Another reason is you can have fun playing with your friends.
you will also enjoy talking with them.
>>You will also enjoy talking with them. (capitalization)
And if you don`t have any friends,then you WILL be lonely and have nobody to play with.
>>If you don\'t have any friends, you will be lonely and have no one to play with.
So I think it`s good to have a friend.^-^-^-^-^
>>CORRECT
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