What is something a boss can do to motivate his workers?

2015-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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One of the most important qualities a leader must have is motivating his workers. A leader must know how to properly motivate others. Inspiring and motivating employees is more important than anything else. Effective leaders are able to release individuals’ potential energy and build teams that are motivated and ready to take on the task at hand. The manager's challenge is to figure out how to tap into that motivation to accomplish work goals. In order for a leader to motivate his employees, he should focus on creating a work environment where fair treatment and performance evaluation with candid feedback is guaranteed. Close supervision is no longer needed. Employees should be empowered to make a decision on his/her own when a direction is set by his/her boss. Above all, respecting employees could be a base to build trust between leaders and employees. A leader should make time to coach and give constructive feedback on his/her employees' work, although it is sometimes hassle.

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One of the most important qualities a leader must have is motivating his workers.

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A leader must know how to properly motivate others. 

>> correct 

Inspiring and motivating employees is more important than anything else.

>> correct

Effective leaders are able to release individuals’ potential energy and build teams that are motivated and ready to take on the task at hand.

>> correct

The manager\'s challenge is to figure out how to tap into that motivation to accomplish work goals

>> correct .

In order for a leader to motivate his employees, he should focus on creating a work environment where fair treatment and performance evaluation with candid feedback is guaranteed.

>> correct

Close supervision is no longer needed.

>> correct

Employees should be empowered to make a decision on his/her own when a direction is set by his/her boss.

>> correct

Above all, respecting employees could be a base to build trust between leaders and employees.

>> correct

A leader should make time to coach and give constructive feedback on his/her employees\' work, although it is sometimes hassle.

>> Better: A leader should make time to coach and give constructive feedback on his/her employees\' work, although it is sometimes a hassle.

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