What is something that always makes you laugh or smile?
학생이 쓴 원문
I got married late, so my second daughter is younger than my friends\' daughters. So, I\'m happiest when I talk and play with my younger daughter. She\'s always tea[이름]g me and wants to sleep with me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jack,
Your answer was wonderful to read. It’s clear that your younger daughter brings a lot of joy into your life. The way you described her tea[이름]g you and wanting to sleep beside you paints a very warm picture of your relationship. Those small, simple moments with children often become the most meaningful memories.
You also expressed your thoughts clearly: even though you married later than your friends, you’ve found a special kind of happiness through your younger daughter. That honesty makes your writing feel natural and heartfelt.
If you ever need a moment of comfort or motivation, it sounds like she is the one who always makes you smile, and that’s something truly special.
~Teacher Cathy
I got married late, so my second daughter is younger than my friends\' daughters.
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OR>>I got married a bit later, so my second daughter is younger than my friends’ daughters.
So, I\'m happiest when I talk and play with my younger daughter.
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OR>>That’s why I’m happiest when I talk and play with my younger daughter.
She\'s always tea[이름]g me and wants to sleep with me.
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OR>>She’s always tea[이름]g me, and she always wants to sleep next to me.
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