What is something that makes your family special?
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I think the number of my family makes us special . There are six people including me in my family. I have three older sisters. My third sister is 13 years old, second is 18years old, and first is 20years old. Nowadays, normally most my friends have no sibling or only one one. I think that having many siblings makes my family very special. I’m lucky and I appreciate my mom.
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I think the number of my family makes us special . There are six
people including me in my family. I have three older sisters. My third
sister is 13 years old, second is 18years old, and first is 20years old.
Nowadays, normally most my friends have no sibling or only one one. I
think that having many siblings makes my family very special. I’m lucky
and I appreciate my mom.
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I think the number of my family makes us special . There are six
people including me in my family. I have three older sisters. My third
sister is 13 years old, second is 18years old, and the eldest one is 20years old.
Nowadays, normally most of my friends have no sibling or only one. I
think that having many siblings makes my family very special. I’m lucky
and I appreciate my mom.
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