-What is something that will happen in the future that you are looking forward to?- (^-^)
학생이 쓴 원문
There are 3 wishes what I have.
First. I want to getting married who I love and I will make happiness family with my partner.
Family is one of most important things in my life. If I will live alone in my future, It will definitely feel loneliness.
I want spend time with my family when I will feel happy, sad or etc.
Second, if only I will have enough money for enjoy my life.
It will quite difficult in my country. Maybe I won\'t get my own time to very long time.
Despite this, If I don\'t have money. I am going to meet some problems in my life.
Last one is that all of my around people\'s health.
Health Life is most important. We don\'t do anything without health body and mind.
I think everybody knows what I want to say.
So, I really looking forward I will get all of them.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! Thank you for your thoughts on this one. I appreciate that you spend a little of your time with your homework. ^ ^
We all look forward to a better future. I hope all of the desires of your heart would come true~! All the best! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
There are 3 wishes what I have.
>>There are three wishes that I have.
>>I have three wishes.
First. I want to getting married who I love and I will make happiness family with my partner.
First. I want to getting married who I love and I will make happiness family with my partner.
>>First, I want to marry the person I really love and build a happy family.
Family is one of most important things in my life.
Family is one of most important things in my life.
>>Having a family is one of the most important things in my life.
If I will live alone in my future, It will definitely feel loneliness.
>>If I will live alone in the future, I will definitely feel lonely.
I want spend time with my family when I will feel happy, sad or etc.
I want spend time with my family when I will feel happy, sad or etc.
>>I want to be with my family and spend time with them in happiness or in sadness.
Second, if only I will have enough money for enjoy my life.
Second, if only I will have enough money for enjoy my life.
>>Second, if only I have enough money to enjoy my life to the fullest.
It will quite difficult in my country.
It will quite difficult in my country.
>>It is quite difficult in my country.
Maybe I won\'t get my own time to very long time.
>>Maybe I won\'t have enough time.
Despite this, If I don\'t have money. I am going to meet some problems in my life.
Despite this, If I don\'t have money. I am going to meet some problems in my life.
>>Despite this, if I don\'t have money, I will encounter some problems in my life.
Last one is that all of my around people\'s health.
Last one is that all of my around people\'s health.
>>Last one, is to wish that all the people I love and close to me would have good health.
Health Life is most important.
Health Life is most important.
>>Having a healthy body and life is the most important.
We don\'t do anything without health body and mind.
>>We can\'t accomplish things without a healthy body and mind.
I think everybody knows what I want to say.
I think everybody knows what I want to say.
>>CORRECT or
>>I think everybody understands what I\'m trying to say.
So, I really looking forward I will get all of them.
So, I really looking forward I will get all of them.
>>So I\'m really looking forward to getting all of them in the future or anytime soon.
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