What is something that will happen in the future that you are looking forward to?

2016-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I have a few wishes that I hope to make them come true. However, they are just my dreams. In order to realize our dreams, we have to make plans and execute them. Without concrete action plans and making efforts to make it happen, the goals will be just wishes that are not feasible. However, thinking twice, I would rather keep remaining in status quo than look forward to something more. I’m more worried about bad things would happen. I strongly hope that misfortune won’t happen to my family although it’s impossible as our life is full of turbulence. Even for the good things, we should remain calm until it actually happens. We don’t need to count our chickens before they are hatched. Everything can change at the last minute. It’s not over till it’s over. Moreover, we shouldn’t be too excited or over-joyful because the good comes with the bad. If we gain something, we will lose others. Life has ups and downs. We should be humble and don't be greedy.Let's appreciate what we own now.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

Happy Friday!

I really hope that your wishes will come true.

All of your ideas that you wrote below are right.

We should always be humble and don\'t be greedy.

We will be more blessed when we do so.

Talk to you in class.

Teacher Nina


I have a few wishes that I hope to make them come true.

>> correct

However, they are just my dreams.

>> correct

In order to realize our dreams, we have to make plans and execute them.

>> correct

Without concrete action plans and making efforts to make it happen, the goals will be just wishes that are not feasible.

>> correct

However, thinking twice, I would rather keep remaining in status quo than look forward to something more.

>> correct

I’m more worried about bad things would happen.

>> correct

I strongly hope that misfortune won’t happen to my family although it’s impossible as our life is full of turbulence.

>> correct

Even for the good things, we should remain calm until it actually happens.

>> correct

We don’t need to count our chickens before they are hatched.

>> correct

Everything can change at the last minute.

>> correct

It’s not over till it’s over.

>> correct

Moreover, we shouldn’t be too excited or over-joyful because the good comes with the bad.

>> correct

If we gain something, we will lose others.

>> correct

Life has ups and downs.

>> correct

We should be humble and don\'t be greedy.

>> correct

Let\'s appreciate what we own now.

>> correct

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