What is something that you are proud of and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Most Korean men are common, I was proud of being a soldier. When I was a soldier in the past, it was hard and I didn\'t want to do it. Because I thought I was wasting my time and thought it was meaningless. However, people acknowledge and respect the soldiers, I feel proud of myself. So now I am proud that I have served in the military.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve! Yes, being a soldier is a very honorable job. We all have something that we are proud of. It resembles all our hard work. It\'s nice that you could share something that you\'re proud of :)
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Most Korean men are common, I was proud of being a soldier.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. Soon!
>> Most Korean men are common because we all served the military. I am proud of being a soldier before.
When I was a soldier in the past, it was hard and I didn\'t want to do it.
>> When I was a soldier, it was hard and at first I didn\'t want to become one.
Because I thought I was wasting my time and thought it was meaningless.
>>I thought I was wasting my time and it was meaningless.
However, people acknowledge and respect the soldiers, I feel proud of myself.
>>However, people acknowledge and respect soldiers so I feel proud of myself.
So now I am proud that I have served in the military.
>>CORRECT
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