What is something that you are thankful for?ᩚ
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I\'m thankful for many things. Firstly, I am thankful for my very nice parents and my sisters. My parents give me everything for me and protect me wherever I am. And luckily I have three kind sisters. Secondly I\'m thankful for living my great house. It is very high, 65th floor as well as large and cozy. I love I\'m living on 65 floor. I feel like I\'m in cyberpunk city when I see through out the window. Lastly, I am thankful to live in this enormous earth. I\'m actually thankful for everything I have.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy holiday! See you next week ^^
T. DON
I think I\'m thankful for many things. Firstly, I am thankful for my very
nice parents and my sisters. My parents give me everything for me and
protect me wherever I am. And luckily I have three kind sisters.
Secondly I\'m thankful for living my great house. It is very high, 65th
floor as well as large and cozy. I love I\'m living on 65 floor. I feel
like I\'m in cyberpunk city when I see through out the window. Lastly, I
am thankful to live in this enormous earth. I\'m actually thankful for
everything I have.
> I think I\'m thankful for many things. Firstly, I am thankful for my very
nice parents and my sisters. My parents give me everything and
protect me wherever I am. And luckily I have three kind sisters.
Secondly I\'m thankful for living in a great house. It is very high, 65th
floor as well as large and cozy. I love living on 65th floor. I feel
like I\'m in cyberpunk city when I see through the window. Lastly, I
am thankful to live in this enormous earth. I\'m actually thankful for
everything I have.
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