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2016-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I’m not imprudent on spending money. I am a type of person who is somewhat frugal. People are willing to pay for what he/she thinks it is worth. People have their own judgement on valuating goods or service he/she wants to buy. Even for the same goods, people feel the value of them differently. This is why some people spend a lot of money on luxury bags, cloths, or jewelries. Whereas other people spend more on traveling and foods. Or some people are obsessed with cars or bikes and spend most of their incomes on them. Speaking of mine, I tend to not spend on cloths. I don’t go to expensive restaurants. It doesn’t matter whether it is goods or service, I become hesitant and give a second thought when it is expensive. “Expensive” also could be differently interpreted by a person. Based on my own guideline the price range of “Expensive” is quite low, which could be cheap to others. I like to buy things which value doesn’t depreciate a lot over time.A house could be a right example.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

Happy Thursday!

One more day before the weekend. Yipee!

I was able to know you better and I learned something from you.

Thank you so much. I hope that you\'ll have a great day.

Teacher Nina


I’m not imprudent on spending money.

>> correct

I am a type of person who is somewhat frugal.

>> correct

People are willing to pay for what he/she thinks it is worth.

>> correct

>> OR: People are willing to pay for what he/ she thinks is worth it,

People have their own judgement on valuating goods or service he/she wants to buy.

>> correct

Even for the same goods, people feel the value of them differently.

>> correct

This is why some people spend a lot of money on luxury bags, cloths, or jewelries.

>> correct

Whereas other people spend more on traveling and foods.

>> correct

Or some people are obsessed with cars or bikes and spend most of their incomes on them.

>> correct

Speaking of mine, I tend to not spend on cloths.

>> correct

>> OR: In my case, I tend not to spend on clothes.

I don’t go to expensive restaurants.

>> correct

It doesn’t matter whether it is goods or service, I become hesitant and give a second thought when it is expensive.

>> correct

“Expensive” also could be differently interpreted by a person.

>> correct

Based on my own guideline the price range of “Expensive” is quite low, which could be cheap to others.

>> correct

I like to buy things which value doesn’t depreciate a lot over time.

>> correct

A house could be a right example.

>> correct

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