What is something that you can spend money on that will make you happy? How long will it make you ha
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I’m not imprudent on spending money.
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I am a type of person who is somewhat frugal.
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People are willing to pay for what he/she thinks it is worth.
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>> OR: People are willing to pay for what he/ she thinks is worth it,
People have their own judgement on valuating goods or service he/she wants to buy.
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Even for the same goods, people feel the value of them differently.
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This is why some people spend a lot of money on luxury bags, cloths, or jewelries.
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Whereas other people spend more on traveling and foods.
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Or some people are obsessed with cars or bikes and spend most of their incomes on them.
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Speaking of mine, I tend to not spend on cloths.
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>> OR: In my case, I tend not to spend on clothes.
I don’t go to expensive restaurants.
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It doesn’t matter whether it is goods or service, I become hesitant and give a second thought when it is expensive.
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“Expensive” also could be differently interpreted by a person.
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Based on my own guideline the price range of “Expensive” is quite low, which could be cheap to others.
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I like to buy things which value doesn’t depreciate a lot over time.
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A house could be a right example.
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