What is something that you would have a hard time giving up and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s hard to get on a diet. Because the world is big and there\'s a lot to eat. If I eat everything I want, I gain weight and my health gets bad, so I always have to fight with food. So I eat vegetables and meat and I work out at the gym, but sometimes it\'s hard to resist food that I want to eat. Whenever I\'m tired, I don\'t want to exercise. So I\'m fixing my mind with the thought that I can do it every day.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sarah! Food is definitely something that is hard to resist. Take it from me. Since the start of the pandemic, I gained so much weight because I am a sucker for food. Hahahaha! Anyways, thank you for sharing.
-Teacher Elise
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I think it\'s hard to get on a diet.
>> I think it\'s hard to go on a diet because the world is big and there\'s a lot to eat.
Because the world is big and there\'s a lot to eat.
>> CONNECT THIS SENTENCE ABOVE
If I eat everything I want, I gain weight and my health gets bad, so I always have to fight with food.
>>If I eat everything I want, I gain weight and my health is at risk so I always have to fight with food. .
OR : If I eat everything I want, I gain weight and my health is at risk so I have this constant battle with food.
So I eat vegetables and meat and I work out at the gym, but sometimes it\'s hard to resist food that I want to eat.
>> So I eat vegetables and meat. I also work out at the gym but sometimes it\'s hard to resist the food that I want to eat.
Whenever I\'m tired, I don\'t want to exercise.
>>CORRECT
So I\'m fixing my mind with the thought that I can do it every day.
>> So I\'m focusing my mind the thought that I can do it everyday.
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