What is something you are curious about? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Who\'s rumor? Gossip? HAHA, I\'m joking.
What I\'m most curious about occurs when I learn something new or when I usually make something.
For example, when I learn a new technology, I wonder how it works or where it can be used.
Because it is a technology that no one knows what the results will be. The pursuit of newness always raises questions.
Also, whenever I make any food, I wonder about the recipe and what it tastes like, but wondering whether the result will be successful or not is a question that arises from my hobby.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for sharing your answer.
Well, the first line got me smiling. I think in usual days, most of us, as normal humans, would also think that way.
But anyway, I like how you shared your answer and explained the reasons behind it.
Great job! ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Who\'s rumor? Gossip? HAHA, I\'m joking.
>> What\'s the rumor? Gossip?
What I\'m most curious about occurs when I learn something new or when I usually make something.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My curiosity is often sparked when I learn new things or engage in creative activities.
For example, when I learn a new technology, I wonder how it works or where it can be used.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: For instance, exploring new technology makes me curious about its functionality and potential applications.
Because it is a technology that no one knows what the results will be.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: This is because such technology often carries unknown outcomes.
The pursuit of newness always raises questions.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Exploring new things always brings up questions.
Also, whenever I make any food, I wonder about the recipe and what it tastes like, but wondering whether the result will be successful or not is a question that arises from my hobby.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Additionally, whenever I cook, I find myself curious about the recipe, the flavors, and whether the final dish will turn out well—this curiosity ties back to my hobby.
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