What is something you are obsessed with?
학생이 쓴 원문
Before the coronaviyus Every day I go to the gym to exercise spinning.
But because it is dangerous I can\'t go now.
I like to exercise very well.
It helps me diet and healty.
So my obsessed is to exercise.
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>>> TEACHER JAMES
Before the coronaviyus Every day I go to the gym to exercise spinning.
>>> Before the coronavirus Every day I go to the gym to exercise spinning.
But because it is dangerous I can\'t go now.
But because it is dangerous I can\'t go now.
>>> CORRECT
I like to exercise very well.
I like to exercise very well.
>>> I really like to exercise.
It helps me diet and healty.
It helps me diet and healty.
>>> It helps me diet and healthy.
So my obsessed is to exercise.
So my obsessed is to exercise.
>>> So my obsession is to exercise.
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