What is something you hate doing when you get home?

2021-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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When I get home, usually I feel happy. From time to time clean the room is boring. ( a little). and, My work is one thing in my house. This is wash the dish and handle food waste. I\'m so happy hahaha

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


When I get home, usually I feel happy.

>> When I get home, usually, I feel happy.
From time to time clean the room is boring. ( a little).

>> From time to time, cleaning the room is a little boring.
and, My work is one thing in my house.

>> I have only one thing to do in my house.
This is wash the dish and handle food waste.

>> This is to wash the dishes and handle the food waste.
I\'m so happy hahaha

>> I\'m so happy. hahaha

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