What is something you hate doing when you get home?
학생이 쓴 원문
Almost everyday I went back home at 8:00pm.
There are traces that I left in the morning like long hairs, clothes and dust, so I have to clean up my house.
But it is the hatest thing that I have to do. I dont like cleaning up and setting my house in order because I\'m so lazy.
Another thing is washing the dishes. Every night, I usually cook for my next day lunch because I\'m on a diet.
I like cooking something but I sigh deeply when the cooking finished and watched the dishes, a knife and the sauces on the sink.
But anyway I am pleased when the all of home workings are finished and the house looks like a model house.
강사 첨삭
Hello Gem!
Great job in your writing! I also really hate cleaning up after myself haha but we have to do it. Anyway, I appreciate your time and effort writing this composition. Keep up the good work! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>Almost every day, I go back home at 8:00pm.
There are traces that I left in the morning like long hairs, clothes and dust, so I have to clean up my house.
There are traces that I left in the morning like long hairs, clothes and dust, so I have to clean up my house.
>>There are traces that I leave in the morning like long hairs, clothes, and dust, so I have to clean up my house.
But it is the hatest thing that I have to do. I dont like cleaning up and setting my house in order because I\'m so lazy.
But it is the hatest thing that I have to do. I dont like cleaning up and setting my house in order because I\'m so lazy.
>>But it is the thing I hate doing the most. I don\'t like cleaning up and putting my house in order because I\'m so lazy.
Another thing is washing the dishes. Every night, I usually cook for my next day lunch because I\'m on a diet.
Another thing is washing the dishes. Every night, I usually cook for my next day lunch because I\'m on a diet.
>>CORRECT!
I like cooking something but I sigh deeply when the cooking finished and watched the dishes, a knife and the sauces on the sink.
I like cooking something but I sigh deeply when the cooking finished and watched the dishes, a knife and the sauces on the sink.
>>I like cooking something but I sigh deeply when I finish and stare at the dishes, a knife, and the sauces on the sink.
But anyway I am pleased when the all of home workings are finished and the house looks like a model house.
>>But anyway, I am pleased when the all of the house chores are finished and the house looks like a model house.
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