What is something you hate doing when you get home?

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

You are right. We should always appreciate little things in our life.

It might be somewhat like a routine.

But some people can\'t have or don\'t have it.

We are blessed in various ways.
There are some people who are really rich but sad at home.

Some poor people who live on the street are so happy with little things.

We shouldn\'t forget how blessed we are.

Thanks for an inspiring essay today.

Talk to you in class.
Teacher Nina

When I get home, I do some house chores such as washing the dishes, doing the laundry, cleaning the house, and ironing from time to time.

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Although they are all time consuming work, I usually don’t mind much.

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>> Better: Although they are all time consuming work, I don\'t mind it.

However, there are times when I’m tired after hard work in the office, I feel like I don’t want to move even my finger.

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>> OR: However, there are times when I’m tired after working hard in the office, I feel like I don’t even want to move my finger.

I want to fill my stomach and lie down on the warm floor and just relax without doing anything.

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When I’m exhausted, I don’t want to even wash or take a shower.

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All of these are daily routines.

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If a day goes without any incidents or misfortunes, it is fortunate and we should appreciate it.

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Everybody says that we should live in the moment and live our life to the fullest.

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But, we often complaint that our life is boring.

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Thinking about people who are suffering a lot due to poverty, starvation, suppression, or health problem, our normal life should be appreciated.

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We often forget how valuable it is to have a normal life and realize its preciousness when losing.

>> Did you mean: We often forget how valuable it is to have a normal life and realize its preciousness when it is already gone.