What is something you have accomplished as an adult that your younger self would be proud of?
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Well, the thing that I can feel proud of myself as my younger is to become a mechanic of airplane, Even thought it\'s a small airline. When I was little, I didn\'t have no idea what I will get a job. Also, I didn\'t make effort anything else. So I can feel that. :)
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Hello Elic! I hope you\'re doing ok right now. Thank you for participating actively in my class today. You did well! You were able to converse with me with minimal corrections. Keep up the good work! ^^ Each day comes with the opportunity to be the best in your area of strength. If you can think it, you can achieve it! :)
Well, the thing that I can feel proud of myself as my younger is to become a mechanic of airplane, Even thought it\'s a small airline.
>> Well, the thing that my younger self would be proud of is if I become an aircraft mechanic even if it\'s just a small airplane.
When I was little, I didn\'t have no idea what I will get a job.
>> When I was little, I didn\'t have any idea of my future.
Also, I didn\'t make effort anything else.
>> I didn\'t not make so much effort for that.
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