What is something you have done that you would never do again?

Happy Thursday, Mr. [이름]! Thanks for this funny story. I\'m not a graceful dancer myself. It\'s probably too late for us to learn dancing. ^^

Here are a few grammatical corrections. You\'re improving on the use of articles so keep it up. See you, Sir! ^_^

~T.Avery

I had a chance to perform a K-pop dance at the retirement party of my manager.

>> CORRECT

I hadn\'t danced in front of many people before the event, so I registered dance academy to learn how to dance.

>> I hadn\'t danced in front of many people before the event, so I registered to a dance academy to learn how to dance.

There are about 10 students in my class.

>> There were about 10 students in my class.

They looked quite younger than me.

>> CORRECT

It was not easy for my to attend the academy because of my ages.

>> It was not easy for me to attend the academy because of my age.

However, I tried to attend the class every time and practice it.

>> CORRECT

OR>> However, I tried to attend the class regularly and practiced dancing diligently.
I thought I can dance very, if I learnt it from professional dancer.

>> I thought I can dance very well, if I learnt it from a professional dancer.

But I realized that I didn\'t have talent to dance.

>> CORRECT

OR>> I found out that I have no talent in dancing.