What is something you have done that you would never do agian?
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One day i worked at the logistics service company for one day.
>> I once worked at a logistics service company for one day.
My duty was unloading the stuffs into the trucks.
>> My duty was unloading some stuff into the trucks.
Before i worked at there, i had heard many advice which is very tough work.
>> Before I worked there, I had heard that it is a very tough work.
So i don\'t want to try this job.
>> Therefore, I didn\'t want to try this job.
But one of my friends told me that If you are man you have to do that before you were died.
>> One of my friends told me that if I am a man, I would have to do that before I die.
So we were went to the logistics service company together and started to work.
>> Therefore, we went to the logistics service company together and started working.
After got off work, we certainly decided that we will never do it again.
>> After we got off work, we certainly decided that we will never do it again.
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