What is something you haven't done yet that you hope to do in the future?

2016-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Q. What is something you haven't done yet that you hope to do in the future? A. Last year, I decided that I would test OPIc which is speaking test in Korea. However, my speaking skill is very low. So I have to wait until my English is high. I hope that my speaking English is very well. And then, I want to lose my weight. So I have to go on a diet. I want to succeed it.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

Thank you for writing the composition homework I gave and for sharing your thoughts. ^^

I am hoping that I will be able to help you improve your English skills. We can do it! ^^

Please do no forget to review the corrections I have written below. See you again tomorrow!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Q. What is something you haven\'t done yet that you hope to do in the future?

A. Last year, I decided that I would test OPIc which is speaking test in Korea.

>> Last year, I decided that I would take an OPIC test, which is a speaking test in Korea.
 However, my speaking skill is very low.

>> However, my speaking skill is very low.
 So I have to wait until my English is high.

>> So I have to wait until my English skills will become higher.
 I hope that my speaking English is very well.

>> I hope that my speaking skills will improve very well.
 And then, I want to lose my weight.

>> correct!
 So I have to go on a diet.

>> correct! 
 I want to succeed it.

>>  I want to succeed.

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