What is something you never learned to do but wish you had?

2021-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Firstly,I want to learn communication skills. so, I want to get along with people. Second, I want to a negotiation strategy on business. In this case, I will learn the money

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Firstly,I want to learn communication skills.

>> Firstly, I want to learn more about communication skills.
so, I want to get along with people.
>> So I want to get along and communicate well with people.
Second, I want to a negotiation strategy on business.

>> Secondly, I want to learn about negotiation strategy on business.
In this case, I will learn the money

>> In this case, I will learn about handling money.

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