What is something you wished you had learned when you were younger?- (^-^)
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Teachers in elementary school asked us about our dream. The popular jobs students dreamed were scientists, doctors, police and the president. I also had a similar dream when I was young. My dream had changed a lot. I would like to be a soldier when I was in high school. I wanted to operate aircraft in the air force. However,my grade wast not enough to enter military school. There were a lot of requirements in order to apply for the military school. These were the school grade reports, physical strength and so on. I didn\'t meet any requirements that the military school asked. So, I had to give up my dream.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for spending a little of your time doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
You did great with this one! Good job! ^ ^ Too bad you weren\'t able to pursue your dreams because you didn\'t meet the requirements. But I hope you are not resentful of what happened and still be passionate with your life! ^ ^
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The popular jobs students dreamed were scientists, doctors, police and the president.
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I also had a similar dream when I was young.
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My dream had changed a lot.
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I would like to be a soldier when I was in high school.
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I wanted to operate aircraft in the air force.
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However,my grade wast not enough to enter military school.
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There were a lot of requirements in order to apply for the military school.
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These were the school grade reports, physical strength and so on.
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I didn\'t meet any requirements that the military school asked.
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So, I had to give up my dream.
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