What is sovereignty and why is it important?
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The meaning of sovereignty is so difficult. I learned it means the right of each country. It comes from the people and represents people\'s opinion. It makes a country with territory and peoples. Most countries should not be interfered from others. It exist independently. However, it is disturbed by strong power country. To avoid an interference, each country makes oneself strong. I think a cooperating work of the peoples make it possible to block disturbance of other.
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~ T. Camille>> CORRECT!
I learned it means the right of each country.
>> I learned it before, and it means that it is the right of each country.
It comes from the people and represents people\'s opinion.
>> CORRECT!
It makes a country with territory and peoples.
>> It makes a country with territory and people.
Most countries should not be interfered from others.
>> Most countries should not be interfered by others.
It exist independently.
>> It exists independently.
However, it is disturbed by strong power country.
>> However, it is disturbed by strong countries.
OR >> However, it is disturbed by powerful countries.
To avoid an interference, each country makes oneself strong.
>> CORRECT!
I think a cooperating work of the peoples make it possible to block disturbance of other.
>> I think a cooperating work of the people makes it possible to block disturbances of other nations.
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