What is special about your generation?
학생이 쓴 원문
My generation experienced both the analog and digital.
My generation liked ballad, rock, and dance music.
My generation worked hard and was sincere children`s education.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jane!
Every generation has a unique experience. I agree with all that you have written. From analog to digital, and now, AI, the future promises a quick growth in technology. We ought to pay attention to innovations.
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See you soon.
-T. Donna~
My generation liked ballad, rock, and dance music.
My generation worked hard and was sincere children`s education.
>> My generation experienced both the analog and the digital.
My generation liked ballad, rock, and dance music.My generation worked hard and was sincere on children\'s education.
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