What is special in Korean food

2012-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

학생이 쓴 원문

There are many traditional Korean food but in this book they introduced about Kimchi,Dwenjang and Hong Oh. Those are all fermented food. They smell very strange and also Hong Oh whichi is famous in JeonLa DO is smell like ammonia it make our nose pop. Becasue of this fermented food many forigen people thought Korea is very strange but after they know about how healthy are Korean foods they are tring to eat Korean food.

강사 첨삭

Hi Nicolas! I am so happy to read about your composition. One interesting way how to enhance English vocabulary is to simply start writing expressing yourself. Because writing is an excellent method of improving one\'s skill at writing and at self expression. And also, I agree that Korean food is healthy. Keep up putting your thoughts into writing! T. Michelle :) There are many traditional Korean food but in this book they introduced aboutKimchi,Dwenjang and Hong Oh. >>> Correct just be careful of proper spacing and punctuation. ^^ >>> There are many traditional Korean food, but in this book they introduced aboutKimchi, Dwenjang and Hong Oh. Those are all fermented food. >>> Correct They smell very strangeand also Hong Oh whichi is famous in JeonLa DO is smell like ammonia it make our nose pop. >>> The smell of the food is very strange and even Hong Oh, which is famous in JeonLa-DO, smells like ammonia it makes our noses pop. Becasue of this fermented food many forigen people thought Korea is very strange but after they know about how healthy are Korean foods they are tring to eat Korean food. >>>>Because of this fermented food, many of the foreigners thought of Korea as very strange but after they get to know how healthy are the Korean foods they will try to eat it.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·