What is sportsmanship for you?
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 Fair competition might be basic sportsmanship. Unfortunately, We sometimes watch that a few players are cheating on their rivals, or juries have made biased decisions, especially for their homeland’s players at international matches. Even audiences sometimes make a noise in order to annoy the opposite players while they grab a great chance.
However, the day before yesterday, I saw a video about the other side from the cruel competitive sports. This collective clip starts with that a guy who has run as a third winner in a triathlon makes a mistake to head to a wrong way at the last corner. At that moment, the other runner right behind him passes, but stops just before the finish line, and waits for him until he is there ahead. In the interview, this beautiful loser said this was right. Finally, the organizer awarded the some 3rd prize to this hero. Considering the marketing aspect, the host could take more benefits, so everyone could be happy by good sportsmanship.
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Thank you [이름]!
~Lucy
Fair competition might be basic sportsmanship.
>>Fair competition might be a basic sportsmanship.
Unfortunately, We sometimes watch that a few players are cheating on their rivals, or juries have made biased decisions, especially for their homeland’s players at international matches.
>>CORRECT!
Even audiences sometimes make a noise in order to annoy the opposite players while they grab a great chance.
>>CORRECT!
However, the day before yesterday, I saw a video about the other side from the cruel competitive sports. >>CORRECT!
This collective clip starts with that a guy who has run as a third winner in a triathlon makes a mistake to head to a wrong way at the last corner.
>>CORRECT!
At that moment, the other runner right behind him passes, but stops just before the finish line, and waits for him until he is there ahead.
>>CORRECT!
In the interview, this beautiful loser said this was right.
>>CORRECT!
Finally, the organizer awarded the some 3rd prize to this hero.
>>Finally, the organizer awarded the 3rd prize to this hero.
Considering the marketing aspect, the host could take more benefits, so everyone could be happy by good sportsmanship.
>>CORRECT!
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