What is success for you?
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I think a success is process to achieve something that I want. success is not earning money.
If I achieved something that I want, that\'s a success.
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I think a success is process to achieve something that I want.
>> I think that success is the process of achieving something that I really wanted.
success is not earning money.
>> Success is not just about earning money.
If I achieved something that I want, that\'s a success.
>> It is more about achieving the dreams that I\'ve always dreamed of.
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