What is sucess for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I Think success meaning is so hard for myself.
because, standard of success is different for everyone.
But, I think, anything care about whatever I do.
money , time or something. anything is no problem.
And when I felt that my life is happy and peaceful. and my relationship is good for my around people if I do something I felt unstable nervous and chased it means isn’t happier.
so, I think everything is comfortable and when I can do that, it is success,
강사 첨삭
Hello, Hari!
Maybe you were trying to tell me that being successful is being happy and fulfilled with what you have. And, I agree with what you said that people have different definitions of success and it depends on one\'s perspective. ***To more success this year! ^___^
-Chammy.
I Think success meaning is so hard for myself.
>> I think it is hard to give the meaning of success.
OR
>> I find it hard to define success.
because, standard of success is different for everyone.
>>Because the standard of success is different for everyone.
But, I think, anything care about whatever I do.
>> But, I think, nobody cares about whatever I do.
money , time or something. anything is no problem.
>>If there\'s no problem with money, time or something.
And when I felt that my life is happy and peaceful. and my relationship is good for my around people if I do something I felt unstable nervous and chased it means isn’t happier.
>>And when my relationship with the people around me is wonderful then, I feel like my life is happy and peaceful. But if I do something that makes me feel unstable, nervous, and chased, it means I\'m not happy.
so, I think everything is comfortable and when I can do that, it is success,
>>So I think if everything seems comfortable and if I can do that, it is a success.
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