What is that one thing that you will not change about yourself and why?
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In my opinion, I will not change my thoughts about justice.
I saw a lot of people who did bad things only because of money.
Of course we can earn money, but we should act inside of justice.
But some people get out of justice and do something that they shouldn\'t do.
And I don\'t wanna be one of them.
So for me, the one thing that I won\'t change about myself is the thoughts about justice.
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Hi [이름]:)
That\'s a good thing that even if you\'re still young, you know your stand in terms of justice. :)
In my opinion, I will not change my thoughts about justice.
>> CORRECT
I saw a lot of people who did bad things only because of money.
>> CORRECT
Of course we can earn money, but we should act inside of justice.
>> Of course we can earn money, but we should act in the side of justice.
But some people get out of justice and do something that they shouldn\'t do.
>> But some people refuse to do so and they still do things that are illegal.
And I don\'t wanna be one of them.
>> CORRECT
So for me, the one thing that I won\'t change about myself is the thoughts about justice.
>> So for me, the one thing that I won\'t change about myself are my thoughts about justice.
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